Nice effort! Made me smile.
Nice effort! Made me smile.
Thank you!
Nice try but I'm sorry, this isn't really a place for works in progress. You should just finish it then try again.
I'm sorry. I didn't know that.
Very well and simply animated! You don't lolligag and drag on either, you get to the point at a nice pace and it's humerous and fun! By far though, my favourite part was the end with the dramatic music, it was very emotional and gripping to me. 10/10 would love it in a serious animation. Good job!
Thank you!
I'm glad the ending had somewhat of an impact on you. I might make something that's actually serious some day so watch out for that (maybe next round if I make it?).
Honestly I think it was lacking build up and it was missing a proper introduction of characters and setting so I didn't really understand what was going on. I think you should also work on your voice acting, it would appear as though you're holding back, it doesn't sound sincere but it also sounds like you're new to this so I'll cut you some slack. Two stars because it wasn't anything too new or interesting in my opinion but good luck for future endeavours!
Thank you for your feedback, I'll definitely consider the voice acting practice. And as for the characters, they're from the web series I am working on. I've already posted the first two episodes feel free to check em out.
I just do STUFF!
https://www.patreon.com/Mushromeo
Age 29, Male
Animator
Australia
Joined on 11/2/07